First of all, I would like to point out that I'm not mean, wolves are mean. (Thank you, Cornelia Hale- WITCH reference)
Second, when someone reviews your story they aren't necessarily doing it to help you start a fan club. They may be trying to not so gently nudge you in a better direction than where you're heading.
Like when you load your story and you have a large block of dialogue one person talking after another- that shouldn't be that way. It's wrong, hard to read and seizure inducing. If someone asks you to fix that they mean separate all the dialogue not just the large blocks.
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Chibi Horsewoman
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